Learn what NOT to do - and how to fix a bad proposal - from the worst grant writer, ever

This video gives you a live demonstration applying the principles of Four Steps To Funding.

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  Original R21 (Triaged/Unscored)

  Here is the original R21 as it was submitted to the study section that dinged it (i.e. it was not discussed and therefore not scored)

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  R21 Rewrite iteration 1

  Here is the quick (~30 minute) rewrite of the proposal. If this were to be submitted, I'd suggest a number of additional iterations. However, you should be able to see the difference already by putting these principles into action.